As I read the comments on my research paper and my literary analysis, I really need to work on organization, transition, and repetition. On my research paper, I didn't specifically do well on organizing my three main points of my thesis and they didn't flow into each other particularly well. They kind of all complimented each other, so when I was explaining my reasoning, it got really repetitive. On my personal narrative, I struggled with the same things. I had an informal voice when I tried to transition from paragraph to paragraph, and my starting sentences got repetitive. It is very important that I work on all three of these things as I grow as a writer. Whether I like it or not, flow, organization, transition, etc. are all important to help the reader read what you are saying without struggling and getting confused. Because you can have some great ideas, but if your reader can't understand what you are trying to say, then it will be hard to...
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